reflection 3

I think the progress through this class is going good. For one thing I am a better at writing than when I first started this class. I learned different forms of writing and how to take those ideas into a paper. The one thing I need to work on is organizing my paper. It seems like when I am writing a paper some of the paragraphs do not fit in with the main idea.

I still think peer reviewing is the best way to try and fix all of the errors. Also it gives opinions from other people. It helps with their opinions because it gives ideas on what you can add to your paper.

I thought I did pretty good on my observation paper. The only thing that I could have worked on better was the conclusion. I did not explain the purpose which could confuse the audience. I tried to be as detailed as possible and trying to use the 5 senses.

I am certain that my observation paper will be in the portfolio. Hopefully when I revise my 3 papers they will be good enough to go into the portfolio. I might have to go back a read all the papers I have done and see which ones I can work with. I definitely have to rearrange some of the ideas of my paper to make it all fit together.